Quick Mindful Tips
31.) Sensory details
32.) Specific concrete language replaces summary abstraction
33.) Try to describe how story works, what it does, and how it is rendered.
34.) ASSUME NOBODY CARES!
35.) Is the writer in full control of the language
36.) Where does it go off the rails?
37.) What different choices in craft to improve
38.) Moments in story
39.) Little things change it so much
40) What to leave in, what to take out.
To be continued…